Lunchtime on Day #Oh-for-Christ's-Sake of Chapter Two Revisions

read a few paragraphs.

oh my god.

scroll up.

read paragraphs again.

tweak the first few sentences.

delete extraneous words.

read again.

make disgusted face.

ponder re-writing the whole damned chapter.

despair.

read a little further.

oh, wait. that bit’s sort of good.

oh.

so’s that one.

decide not to rewrite.

scroll back up.

tweak tweak tweak.

delete delete delete.

read again.

despair. again.

close laptop and return to solving someone else’s problems.